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荒城冰月老师已布置了新一期--文坛第33期作业，这次是跟跟苏轼掰手腕，写
首定风波 ，链接如下
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=184091
希望诗友们积极参与。👍👌😁-----
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现对文坛作业32期，写诗作业 三十二：把这几首最著名的《七绝》译成英文！作一个小结。
本次作业共收到36件作品，其中包括荒城冰月老师的指导作品2件和realspiro兄的 评论大贴一件，老师和诗友们提交的在本坛发布的作业33件。感谢参与挑战这次艰难作业的勇士们，更艰辛的挑战已经到来。😊🤣
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第一部分 荒城冰月老师对本次作业的题解指导和realspiro兄对英译古诗的大贴，共3件
1.
写诗作业 三十二：把这几首最著名的《七绝》译成英文！
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=179461
2.
荒城诗话：咱们汉语古典诗词译成英文真得那么难吗？
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=180174
3.
Realspiro 【真君诗文戏话】第七篇 人散后，一钩新月天如水
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=180310
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第二部分，荒城冰月老师和诗友们提交的作业，33件
1.
Talvez 交作业，出塞 英文版，完全充数版
Frontier
Gate
QIN´S moonlight
shed on the HAN´S gate alone,
Nobody to see back yet from their long Journey.
If were the flying general of dragon city there,
The hu
people would never pass the Yin
mountain.
秦时明月汉时关，万里长征人未还。但使龙城飞将在，不教胡马度阴山。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=179676
2.
荒城冰月 交作业：英译唐王之涣的《凉州词》抛砖版也
Song of Liangzhou
Wang
Zhihuan (Tang Dynasty)
The Yellow
River climbs far into the sky,
A lone fort
rises ten thousand metres high.
Why should
the Qiang flute grieve willows not grow?
Spring wind
ne’er passes Yumen Pass by.
黄河远上白云间，一片孤城万仞山。羌笛何须怨杨柳，春风不度玉门关。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=179693
3.
Liaokang
于谦《石灰吟》英译
Ode to Lime By Yu Qian
A thousand
blows wrench thee from mountains deep;
Through
raging flames, thou shalt thy calm still keep.
Though
crushed to dust, thou fearest not the pain;
Thy purity
shall on this earth remain.
千锤万凿出深山，烈火焚烧若等闲。粉骨碎身浑不怕，要留清白在人间。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=179791
4.
黄不黄 交作业：英译苏轼《题西林壁》
横看成岭侧成峰，远近高低各不同。不识庐山真面目，只缘身在此山中。
What you
see are different, when you are different.
You never
see the whole picture, when you are in the picture.
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=179972
5.
荒城冰月 交作业：把李白的《早发白帝城》译成英文
Early
Departure from Baidicheng by：Li Bai
At dawn I
left Baidicheng beneath the colored sky,
A thousand
miles to Jiangling — one day went by.
The
riverbanks resound with monkeys' mournful call,
My light
boat past ten thousand peaks before the eye.
朝辞白帝彩云间，千里江陵一日还。两岸猿声啼不住，轻舟已过万重山。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=180023
6.
Talvez 交作业，英译王维《送元二使安西》，抛砖版
Farewell to
YUAN-ER for Anxi by Wang wei
----
Morning
rain falls on WEI city absolving slim
dust stay，
Freshening
up the guest inn with green willow light
ray。
Another cup
of Baijiu should be forwarded to you , dear
Less friends would be encountered out there of
Yang gateway.
原文 王维《送元二使安西》
渭城朝雨浥轻尘，客舍青青柳色新。劝君更尽一杯酒，西出阳关无故人。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=180211
7.
千杯 《乌衣巷》英译
刘禹锡《乌衣巷》
朱雀桥边野草花，乌衣巷口夕阳斜。旧时王谢堂前燕，飞入寻常百姓家。
By
Vermilion Bridge, wildflowers grow,
At
Black-Clad Lane, the sun sinks low.
Wang and
Xie’s grand halls of yore,
Are now the
common folk’s once more.
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=180214
8.
千杯 《小池》英译
杨万里《小池》
泉眼无声惜细流，树阴照水爱晴柔。小荷才露尖尖角，早有蜻蜓立上头。
The spring
trickles softly, out of sight,
Tree
shadows dance in waters bright.
A lotus bud
peeks, fresh and slight,
A dragonfly
perches, poised and light.
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=180237
9.
荒城冰月 交作业：把杜牧的《清明》译成英文
The Day of
Mourning for the Dead
Du Mu
A drizzling
rain falls like tears, On this cold Mourning Day.
In grief
a lonely man appears, Soul nearly lost,
on his returning way.
How he
wishes to reach a bar,A cowherd points to it not far.
In a
village 'mid apricot flowers,Where he might pass his sad hours.
中文原文：《清明》（唐.杜牧）
清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=180776
10.
Talvez
交作业，英译 张继《枫桥夜泊》抛砖版
Overnight
mooring at maple bridge by Zhang Ji
Sky is full
of frost after moonset , the crow cawed past
Maple sway
,riverbank lights blink, I barely slept.
Suddenly from out of GUSU city at midnight,
A HANSHAN
temple bell fall down my boat.
原文如下 张继《枫桥夜泊》
月落乌啼霜满天，江枫渔火对愁眠。姑苏城外寒山寺，夜半钟声到客船。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=180878
11.
乐创坊 交作业】杜牧《清明》简洁英文版
Qingming [Tang] Dumu
Qingming
Day pouring rain, Miss departed loved
ones terribly.
Where are
bars to get drunk? Apricot Blossom Village far away.
《清明》【唐】杜牧
清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=180880
12.
Talvez 交作业，英译 王安石《泊船瓜洲》，抛砖版
Mooring At
Guazhou By Wang Anshi
Between
Jingkou and Guazhou lies a water，
Zhongshan
is away a few mountains ‘s border.
Spring
breeze blows green southern bank of
river,
Wish I
came back with moonlight shone on me
bigger.
原文 王安石《泊船瓜洲》
京口瓜洲一水间，钟山只隔数重山。春风又绿江南岸，明月何时照我还。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=180919
13.
荒城冰月 交作业：把杜牧的《清明》译成英文，精简版
The Day of
Mourning for the Dead Du Mu
Cold on the
Mourning Day,
Soul nearl
lost on his way.
He needs
wine to resist showers,
A cowherd
points to the apricot flowers.
中文原文：《清明》（唐.杜牧）
清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=180893
14.
千杯 《画鸡》英译
唐寅《画鸡》
头上红冠不用裁，满身雪白走将来。平生不敢轻言语，一叫千门万户开。
A crimson
crown, so bold and bright,
His snowy
robes are pure and white.
He rarely
speaks, makes scarcely a sound,
Till dawn
arrives and wakes the town.
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=180995
15.
Talvez 交作业，英译 苏轼《饮湖上初晴后雨》，抛砖版
SUNNY AND
RAINY DAY IN WEST LAKE BY SU SHI
The
sunlight ripples and dances on the water’s track,
Before lakeside mountains long to call rainy shrouds
back.
The West
Lake serves as a metaphor for divine Xishi’s beauty，
Where
simple attire or rich adornment always match her destiny.
原文 苏轼《饮湖上初晴后雨》
水光潋滟晴方好，山色空蒙雨亦奇。欲把西湖比西子，淡妆浓抹总相宜。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=181138
16.
Chuanliu
交作业：把李白《早发白帝城》译成英文，无韵版
Early
Departure from Baidi Li Bai
I leave
Baidi at dawn, high among the clouds.
A thousand
miles to Jiangling: one day.
Monkeys cry
from either bank, their calls still ringing —
my boat
already gone, ten thousand mountains falling away behind me.
中文原文：李白《早发白帝城》
朝辞白帝彩云间，千里江陵一日还。两岸猿声啼不住，轻舟已过万重山。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=181355
17.
黄不黄 交作业：英译戚继光《马上作》
南北驱驰报主情，江花边草笑平生。一年三百六十日，多是横戈马上行。
《On a ride》
Driven by
the emperor, and smile to my flower.
A year of
three hundred and sixty days, with spear in hand and the horse rides.
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=181462
18.
Talvez 交作业，英译 王安石《登飞来峰》
Climp to
fly mountain by Wang Anshi
Tower of
Thousand Xuns fly onto mountain high ,
At the
sunrise the crow is to be heard to stop
by.
Not fear of
floating clouds like eyes blocking my ,
Just
because I am in the first-layer of the sky.
原文 王安石《登飞来峰》
飞来山上千寻塔，闻说鸡鸣见日升。不畏浮云遮望眼，自缘身在最高层。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=181551
19.
Talvez 交作业，英译 林升《题临安邸》
On lin-an
residence by Lin sheng
House after
mansion, mount before mountain ,
When to
break the west lake gala chain?
Soft
breeze blow visitor’s
minds lost,
Proposing a
Hanzhou for Bianzhou toast.
原文 林升《题临安邸》
山外青山楼外楼，西湖歌舞几时休？暖风熏得游人醉，直把杭州作汴州。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=181571
20.
且听风吟 交作业：Lost in the
Forest
Trees from
the front, peaks from the side,
Every fresh
path is a wild new ride.
Why is the
mountain such a giant maze?
'Cause I’m
lost in its trickster ways!
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=181647
21.
Chuanliu
交作业：把杜牧的《清明》译成英文，小品版
QINGMING
A Skit
Based on the Poem by Du Mu
Characters: Traveler & Shepherd Boy
Setting: A country road in northern China. Soft rain
falls steadily.
Scene 1:
The Rain
(The
Traveler walks in slowly, holding a paper umbrella. He wipes the rain from his
face and sighs.)
Traveler:
(looking around) Oh, what a gloomy day! I
could really use a drink right now!
Scene 2:
The Encounter
(The
Shepherd Boy appears, briskly walking along the country road.)
Traveler:
(calling out) Excuse me, young boy!
Shepherd
Boy: (turning around) Yes?
Traveler: Is there a tavern nearby?
Scene 3:
The Direction
Shepherd
Boy: (smiling and pointing into the distance)
Look over there!
(The
Traveler turns and looks in the direction the boy is pointing.)
Scene 4:
The Village [Zoom In]
(The camera
follows the direction the Shepherd Boy is pointing. Through the mist, an
ancient village nestled among apricot blossoms slowly comes into view.)
(As the
village appears, soft traditional Chinese music starts to play ... )
[THE END]
原文：《清明》（唐 杜牧）
清明时节雨纷纷，路上行人欲断魂。借问酒家何处有，牧童遥指杏花村。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=181876
22.
千杯 饮湖上初晴后雨》英译
苏轼《饮湖上初晴后雨》
水光潋滟晴方好，山色空蒙雨亦奇。欲把西湖比西子，淡妆浓抹总相宜。
When
rippling waters gleam in sunny skies,
And
mist-veiled hills in rain enchant the eyes.
If West
Lake be compared to Beauty’s queen,
In light or
lavish dress, she reigns serene.
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=181944
23.
Talvez 交作业，英译 赵翼《论诗·其二》
原文 赵翼《论诗·其二》
李杜诗篇万口传，至今已觉不新鲜。江山代有才人出，各领风骚数百年。
About
Poems 2， Zhao Yi
In thousands' mouths live on LIDU’S poems though，
No longer
do I feel fresh from them to show.
Every
generation has its talents come out，
Reigning within hundreds of years only with Clout.
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=182231
24.
Talvez 交作业，英译 唐温如《题龙阳县青草湖》
ON GREEN
GRASS LAKE TANG WENRU--
The
west wind blow the Dongting wave trite,
Through a
night XIANG JUN’S hair turns much white.
Too drunk
to realize the sky lies in the water,
Only that a
boat of dreams cover the star river.
原文 唐温如《题龙阳县青草湖》
西风吹老洞庭波，一夜湘君白发多。醉后不知天在水，满船清梦压星河。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=182782
25.
Talvez 交作业，英译 杨基《天平山中》
In the
Tianping Mountain by Yang Ji---
The fluffy drizzle
wet the chinaberry soaked,
And south
wind blow the loquat in all trees choked.
Far o near
is the mountain I don’t remember with
easy steps,
Warblers
and blossoms send me home along the path into depth.
原文
杨基《天平山中》
细雨茸茸湿楝花，南风树树熟枇杷。
徐行不记山深浅，一路莺花送到家。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=182816
26.
千杯 《送元二使安西》英译
王维《送元二使安西》
渭城朝雨浥轻尘，客舍青青柳色新。劝君更尽一杯酒，西出阳关无故人。
The morning
rain has washed away,
The willows
shine in fresh array;
Come, drain
one final cup of wine,
Beyond Yang
Pass, no old friends stay.
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=182918
27.
荒城冰月 交作业：把郑板桥的《竹石》译成英文（荒城冰月）
Bamboo on
the Rock Zheng Xie (Qing Dynasty)
It bites
the green hill, never letting go,
Rooted firm
in broken rocks below.
Through all
the torments it stands unshaken,
No matter
how fierce the winds may blow.
《竹石》（清.郑燮）
咬定青山不放松，立根原在破岩中。千磨万击还坚劲，任尔东西南北风。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=182950
28.
且听风吟 交作业（二），Dancing
with the Storm
Forget the
snappy rain on leaves,
I walk so
slow through windy streets.
Flip-flops
better than a horse? Seriously, who knows?
Splash
along in bare feet, that’s just how he does!
A freezing
draft hits my numb brain,
Ice cold!
But hot coffee’s calling through the rain.
Looking
back at the spot where I slipped and fell down...
Oh well!
I’m totally soaked from head to my crown!
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=183078
29.
轻舟 交作业：橘闲（宽松版）
小橘金黄好剥，清甜淌在心窝。看书闲把小诗作。
橘香绕纸页，自在不忙活，光阴自在乐。
Tangerines,
tiny and gold,
peel easy,
taste sweet.
Book open,
pen idle,
I write a
verse or two.
Nothing to
do. Nowhere to be.
Just sweet,
just slow.
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=183566
30.
荒城冰月 骑驴一首：与风雨共舞，戏译风吟兄的
Dancing with the Storm
小心半日唯扶树，大醉今番不识家。人字拖偏陷泥沼，何如光脚走天涯。
风吹斗笠牵疼髻，雨想咖啡敲冷牙。跌落方知人世险，笑翻塘里一群蛙。
风吟兄英文原文：Dancing
with the Storm（by 且听风吟）
Forget the
snappy rain on leaves,
I walk so
slow through windy streets.
Flip-flops
better than a horse? Seriously, who knows?
Splash
along in bare feet, that’s just how he does!
A freezing
draft hits my numb brain,
Ice cold!
But hot coffee’s calling through the rain.
Looking
back at the spot where I slipped and fell down...
Oh well!
I’m totally soaked from head to my crown!
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=183585
31.
Talvez
交作业，英译李商隐 《夜雨寄北》
Longing in
the Rainy Night Li shangyin.
Days pass
by without a date of return from far beyond,
In the
mount Ba the night rain swells the autumn pond.
When
together we could trim the candle wicks
by west window ,
I’ll fill you in how I feel about that night
rain as a vagabond.
《夜雨寄北》 —— 李商隐
君问归期未有期，巴山夜雨涨秋池。
何当共剪西窗烛，却话巴山夜雨时。
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=183685
32.
千杯 《己亥杂诗·其五》英译1
33.
千杯《己亥杂诗·其五》英译2
龚自珍《己亥杂诗·其五》
浩荡离愁白日斜，吟鞭东指即天涯。落红不是无情物，化作春泥更护花。
Version 1:
The
slanting sun, my parting sorrows swell,
My whip
points east, where distant realms do dwell.
The fallen
blooms are not in vain laid low,
They turn
to earth, and bid new blossoms grow.
Version 2：
Beneath the
slanting sun, my sorrows grow,
My whip
points east, to lands I shall not know.
The fallen
blooms still hold a tender care,
They turn to
earth, new blossoms to prepare.
https://www.vava8.com/index.php?app=index&act=view&id=183855
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