交作业：英译唐王之涣的《凉州词》抛砖版也（荒城冰月）
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Song of Liangzhou
Wang Zhihuan (Tang Dynasty)
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The Yellow River climbs far into the cloudy sky,
A lone fort amongst peaks ten thousand metres high.
Why should the Qiang flute grieves that willows not grow?
Spring wind ne’er passes Yumen Pass by.
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廖康兄评曰：最后一句有点短。于是修改成下面这一稿：
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Song of Liangzhou
Wang Zhihuan (Tang Dynasty)
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The Yellow River climbs far into the cloudy sky,
A lone fort amongst peaks ten thousand metres high.
Why is the Qiang flute playing the willow's sad refrain?
The spring winds behind the Yumen Pass always remain.
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最后两句是廖康兄的建议，果然全篇读来更富诗意！
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中文原文：《凉州词》(唐.王之涣)
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黄河远上白云间，一片孤城万仞山。
羌笛何须怨杨柳，春风不度玉门关。
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